Great topic, however, you may want to narrow your topic down to specific countries because I think that this is too broad of a topic and you will not be able to get your point across in a sufficient matter.
This topic sounds very interesting, but I feel as though your topic is tad broad and you could benefit from placing a time period and a few specific items to talk about.
Great topic, however, you may want to narrow your topic down to specific countries because I think that this is too broad of a topic and you will not be able to get your point across in a sufficient matter.
ReplyDeleteI think your question is great. I agree with Davis that the regions could be too broad for the essay.
ReplyDeleteGood topic. You will need to narrow your time period and your countries. Also, it would be helpful to identify two countries for comparison.
ReplyDeleteThis topic sounds very interesting, but I feel as though your topic is tad broad and you could benefit from placing a time period and a few specific items to talk about.
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