How did the advances of technology and communication affect the development of the Abrahamic religions, and furthermore, did the developments only serve to stimulate the formation of different branches of these religions?
Does the second part help add to your argument? I do not think that it is necessary information to prove the first question. Maybe consider doing one question instead.
I agree with Damaris, the first question you ask is indepth enough and clearly states your topic. Try maybe to combine both of the questions into one instead of having two parts.
That is a very interesting topic. However, I would suggest shortening the question to one key point as Damaris and Maddie have suggested above. Also, I would suggest adding specific countries or areas of the world such as the Middle East and Africa because it is an aspect of a historical question which isn't directly addressed in your question.
Does the second part help add to your argument? I do not think that it is necessary information to prove the first question. Maybe consider doing one question instead.
ReplyDeleteI agree with Damaris, the first question you ask is indepth enough and clearly states your topic. Try maybe to combine both of the questions into one instead of having two parts.
ReplyDeleteThat is a very interesting topic. However, I would suggest shortening the question to one key point as Damaris and Maddie have suggested above. Also, I would suggest adding specific countries or areas of the world such as the Middle East and Africa because it is an aspect of a historical question which isn't directly addressed in your question.
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