Great idea and topic but it sounds too wordy. You might want to change the order of the words around so it sounds less choppy. I like how you included specific places, a time period, and a topic in the question.
Awesome topic! As Bridget said, I would make your question more concise, but don't leave out any components of a "good" historical question. Furthermore, I would change "both regions" to "these regions".
Great idea and topic but it sounds too wordy. You might want to change the order of the words around so it sounds less choppy. I like how you included specific places, a time period, and a topic in the question.
ReplyDeleteAwesome topic! As Bridget said, I would make your question more concise, but don't leave out any components of a "good" historical question. Furthermore, I would change "both regions" to "these regions".
ReplyDeleteI like your topic and that you included the time and location. If you can, I would make the question a little more specific.
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